INSANITY
The moon sets on the brow of this night,
As his fiddle calls out for her.
Her gambol all-consuming; he surrenders.
Accompanied by tender notes from the drying river,
She trickles into his restless sleep,
Growing with the zest of a sprout,
Burgeoned by his wilderness.
Behold! The charms of this voluptuous beast,
On whose venom the untamed quench their thirst.
She walks tall among condemners,
Nonchalant of death or mercy.
And she lies wide-awake in the entrails of slumber-
Unceasing movement in the land of the dead,
Colours in the canvas of pale misery…
Rise to glory O Enchantress!
Purple cape on my ivory skin.
As his fiddle calls out for her.
Her gambol all-consuming; he surrenders.
Accompanied by tender notes from the drying river,
She trickles into his restless sleep,
Growing with the zest of a sprout,
Burgeoned by his wilderness.
Behold! The charms of this voluptuous beast,
On whose venom the untamed quench their thirst.
She walks tall among condemners,
Nonchalant of death or mercy.
And she lies wide-awake in the entrails of slumber-
Unceasing movement in the land of the dead,
Colours in the canvas of pale misery…
Rise to glory O Enchantress!
Purple cape on my ivory skin.
18 Comments:
Beautiful words there chikka...
Insanity as I see it is the truest possible pain ur soul can ever feel...the raw pain that has not been hidden or treated with the Insanity of any artificial aid...
Keshi.
I am bad in metaphor – a little confused. Where is the insanity in your poem?
@keshi hmm...so u think insanity is pain? i always thought it was somethin numb, the colours in us we try to hide...
@jay hey mate, welcome to the blog. i dunno how to explain this...write basically on insticnt. but if its any help, the she in my poem is insanity.
Wow! I do not want to sound so typical, but that was great. What brought that to your mind? It has its own sense of reality and paints such vivid pictures in my mind.
weell kissin my own ass isnt my style but wut can i say...me mind works on a way of its own...which is why i have an addictive personality an cant figure out why i do half the stuff that i do...but hey thats really nice of you to say that...really made me happy.@rexvenom
hey dweile
sorry didnt read dat yet
want to tell u i confessed on my main page
ii feel better now
hmmm.. tell me one thing chikka. Why is that I dont get any alerts when U leave a comment on muh blog??? U use some sort of stealth settings or what ;) hehehehehe...
Just kiddin.
Peace,
Firacub.
yep to me Insanity is pain...a deep hidden pain represented by so-called 'madness'. Yes u r right when u say it's numb...pain becomes numb when u have gone through too much of it...
Keshi.
in Keshi's case
it is dumb pain
Yeah,the idea was beautiful..but one again there is a sense of something left unsaid.Not on purpose but as if groping for something and then leaving it..i can't understand how to describe it.You know it better.
Saby dun let the earlier argument get to u so much that ur spewing ur venom on me me everywhere in other people's blogs too! It's actually a low quality. Birds of the same feather flock to gether - u n diffy! U must think that we all have to bow down our heads to ur sordid, immoral, porn-loving principles?? duhhh get a life!! In the vicinity of safe n secure net life u r rejoicing ur seemingly missed fantasies but it dusnt give u any right to force ur sick thoughts upon others. I dun like it n so accept it that way!
Please dun comment abt my comments hereafter, have some respect for ur 'old' blog mates if that means anything to u. Dun act like some 4yr old when ur actually 54.
Keshi.
'unless, u become as little children
u will not enter the gates of heaven'
- Jesus
some times
i tink
the de vile
is insane too
is there a doc in the house ?
its kinda funny
u tell janice
she is dumb
she agrees
dats honesty
u tell Kesh
ur dumb
she cries 'no, i am not!..ur !'
u tell albert eistein dat
he laffs so much
u tink
he is gonna cum
... its a case of fragile ego's in austraylaya
hey saby id really appreciate it if ud stop commenting on the fact that keshis stupid. now i know wut u say is none of my business but it b better if u stopped doin it in ere ok? or im gonna have to delete them.
devile,
i new u wud agree
hey;keshi and de.vile
i hafta disagree with you on the issue of pain and numbness.
u both said that pain gets numb;when it grows old.i dunno why;but pain to me seems to grow deeper as the days go by,getting ever sweeter and sweeter;not number;so that in the end;after X number of days;it just becomes the center of the whole existance.
when u can not imagine urself without the pain.and that is the insanity of it all;
the insanity of this pain called life
or the pain of this insanity called life;
what ever way u look at it.
Hey Word Smith
i am a doc
and i just have dis to say
'GET A LIFE'
for once dis cliche makes sense
- Dr. Anony Mouse MBBS, (Dr.for nuts)
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