Monday, February 14, 2005

BEACH

At the far corner of a sombre life,
The end spreads like the limitless sea.
The waves rhythmically lashing against the rocks,
Letting loose a seductive strain.

The evening dons a forevermore look,
As it alights on the waning soul,
Setting it on a dispassionate fire,
Burgeoning it with the fuel of silence.

The last currents of the day will flow this way,
Laden with promises of a picturesque heaven.
They would comfort the grieving,
And pray for those departing.

Soon the evening would bleed,
And from its wounds would rise the majestic night-
The waves would raise their pitch to roars.
As I lay under the crumbling rocks, the sea would wash me over and over again,
Until the last wisps of life is wiped out of my skin.

One by one the stones would fall,
Drowning me under the debris of tomorrow.







16 Comments:

Blogger Ashes said...

Wish death was so easy.Wish that the end was so absolute.But only in poems and dreams..only if they were real.

10:01 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

the adjectives devile uses tells me a lot ...

sombre life,
limitless sea.
waves rhythmically lashing seductive strain.

The evening dons a forevermore look,
waning soul,
dispassionate fire,
Burgeoning it with the fuel of silence.

last currents
picturesque heaven.
evening would bleed,
majestic night-
The waves would raise their pitch to roars.
crumbling rocks,
last wisps of life is wiped out of my skin.

my analysis:
her life lacks passion
so she longs for death

suggestion:
find dat passion dat wud make life worth living

how ?
start loving your self first
u cannot love another
until u love your self first

6:53 AM  
Blogger Rex Venom said...

Whoo Woo! Surfs up!
(joking) Ah, come on. Cheer up. Life is good. Really!

2:11 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

hey devile
read dis from http://apoetsheart.blogspot.com

These Are Days Of Sadness

The world is full of pain.
Mankind no longer strives.
When people intentionally use cocaine,
just to end the endless days,
these are days of sadness.

A cloud is forming all around.
The visibility is at a new low.
We can not see our own destruction,
lost in the fog of human bondage.
These are days of sadness.

Babies are born everyday.
Some new mothers are throwing them away.
Cradles are left out side of homes,
They offer newborns a chance at life.
These are days of sadness.

The children are lost;
they suffer the pain the worst.
They have no one to show them the way.
Sometimes suicide ends their pain.
These are days of sadness.

The reporters eyes shine.
another murder happens just in time.
They will air the story at six tonight.
These are days of sadness.

© 2005 Kerry Adams

4:35 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

life is not meant to be let go of that lightly;jes.

sandeip

3:28 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

the devile is coming up wid some ting real heavy ... been visiting dis blogg evry day and nite ....

not a sound from here .... i tink she is hating all these nasty comments .....

heard she submitted one of her poems to Sunday Times .... they rote back .... is dis a spoof on poets and poetry ??

9:45 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Nice write-up chikka...I like the last 2 lines...whoaa got me crying.

Keshi.

5:08 AM  
Blogger BM, The Necessary Movement said...

great poem!

3:41 AM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hey do you any other paintings that you would like to share??


Peace,
Firacub.

3:41 AM  
Blogger firacub said...

hi de.ville,
We dont need a religion to believe in God. Its him that we pray to in every respect. Be it as a Hindu, Muslim, Sikh or Christian. These lines have been drawn by us for our own selfish needs. If there should be a religion then let it be called 'humanity'. For we all are equal in front of him, so why there be a difference in this world.



Peace,
Firacub.

4:27 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

yes Fira,
SAB KA MALIK EK

5:50 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

me a goan catlik
but i read the Gita too

and i have been just plain lucky to have met a person by dat name too

been persuading her to rite a blogg and u will see wat i see

she is sweet
and she is fun

5:58 AM  
Blogger wwww said...

Great poem!

8:20 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Saby why anoynmous again? lol..anyways, u cant call urself a 'catholic' unless u follow it's principles...either u get of Cathlicism n do ur porn stuff or dun call urself a Catholic. It aint right. I'm just telling u how I feel about it - that's all.

Keshi.

11:11 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Catholicism***

11:11 AM  
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