Sunday, January 23, 2005

THE WAR

The place was perfect-an almost empty café on a crowded Bombay street. A perfect mug of coffee placed in my hand with its intoxicating aroma tantalising my senses. I was all alone. My cousin was ranting about his latest conquest (a girl, a bike or something equally arid). But he seemed so unusually far away. Like a million miles away or something. Gosh! I definitely needed sleep. Hadn’t slept through better part of last night, dozed off on the floor-third time in two months (bad idea, don’t try this ANYWHERE). Slept again to be woken up by the overtly sour mother of mine who was screaming something about 8 being a highly inappropriate time to be sleeping at. Psh!
10 hours, 7 ‘intentional’ lies later, here I was in a café with my cousin taking a short break from his never ending quest for expensive, tasteless, flashy clothes and accessories. The door tinkled and a lie walked in…a female of 50 or 60 years maybe…beautifully dyed hair, unnaturally ‘white’ned teeth, good figure, high heels and a stomach immaculately pulled in by a corset. Then came in a 20 year old lie, laughing at an unnaturally high pitch, cheering for her boyfriend who spoke impeccably vile things. And then I looked around. Couples, lovers, friends…happy lies…. that camouflage every small detail even minutely showing disgust, loners, ugly men and women, the beggars outside…sad truth. Two extremes. And suddenly the room tore apart into two as the two eternal opponents prepared for a war. They roared, charged and clashed…and the war ceased. Who won?
My cousin asked me if he was looking good today. Smile. ‘Umm yes.’
Lie.
The lonely ugly woman in one of the corners of the well-lit café walked out with a bent head.

17 Comments:

Blogger Jim said...

HA !...so ur a mumbai girl now

dis idea of creative freedom suxs !

hey Jeremy ..u impress no doubt wid yr voyeurism
and commenting on lesser mortals like us ...

but i dont get the point ...
i belong to the old school of tot (yeah me old) ... where evryting u do..evryting u say ...

must have a purpose

i dont see nuthing

8:20 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

me an artist too....

working on yr portrait ..... as to how i see u .... and ur not wearing clohes right now ....


the ugly old wooman who walked out of the cafe wid bent head
will look positively beautiful in comparison ....

8:24 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

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10:31 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hi Buddy,
I should say that you write very well. Just one piece of advice though, no one would help you until or unless you dont make an effort to help yourself. I am blunt by nature so I do apologise if at any instance my remarks or comments hurt you.

Regards,
Firacub.

10:32 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Sorry chick...I must be dumb LOL I cant understand this post of yours'...what is it supposed to convey?

Thanks
Keshi.

9:26 AM  
Blogger Citrus said...

very nice....

@everyone- is it really so terrible to have an opinion, a point of view, to make an observation

..and is it possible to do that without having everyone jump down your throat

10:26 AM  
Blogger Saurav Arya said...

nice one... u write novels?? u can do well in tht..
i h ve plots.. will u like to work on it??

7:41 PM  
Blogger De.vile said...

hey all those who condemn an love,
thanks for w/e u posted in here. so glad agony aunt popped in ere. wud love to hear from u again an again an again, ditto to u firacub. i dont mind if u get a bit bitter, am sure i can take it in good sense. as for u saby, theres no particular reason i wrote it cept for this feeling in me that says lies always win over truth; cuz truth is bitta no one likes it. thats all. hey keshi i dunno if it was supposed to make sense. mayb u could ask saby, since he sees more meaning in it than i do. as for sauvrav, so glad u came along an even more umm i dunno glad u thought i could write up a novel but no thanks ya, ill stick to this nonsensical workin, helps me get through my nights.

10:49 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

Heyyyyyy Saurav
Hope u not plotting wat i tink ur plotting !

6:51 AM  
Blogger Citrus said...

@de.vile- the agony aunt has gone away to america .. should be back in a bit. i'm sure she'll visit then :) [ps: citrus- me- is another person]

10:25 AM  
Blogger De.vile said...

OK Citrus it is then. Welcome anyways. Do keep coming :)

6:02 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

Heyyyy
u2 agony-citrus are sisters ?

u both look a like
btw ... u mangys have captured my brother's family

son marrying hindu mangy girl
daughter marrying christian mangy guy

did i get dat right ?



both are straight !

6:17 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

U r most welcome buddy. I will be dropping by from time to time. Thanx for being a friend. SO take care and be in peace.


Peace Forever,
Firacub
P.S: What the hell does Saby have in his head? cos I smell nothin but shit....

8:13 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

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8:13 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

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8:27 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

heyy fira
u got no balls..
u said someting nasty abt me
and then u deleted it
b4 i cud read

i seen yr pic
ur not so tuff
i cud beat u wid 1 hand tied to me ass

5:46 AM  
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