Wednesday, January 26, 2005

ANSWERS

Sorrow hums a hollow tune,
As I wait for her,
Tumbling questions into the resonating wind,
Seeking her eyes that put forth a heaven,
Nestled in the branches of eternal silence.
Her lips voice illusions like those of a starless sky,
And fingers that rub away everything remotely weak.
Red fist bangs on sealed doors.
Fever and anticipation wait on me-
Companions on a winter day.
I seek answers from an empty soul,
Trampled upon by crimson crosses.
She turns, as I plead,
Her eyes shutting me out of them,
Fleshless voices dragging me into the passages of raw fear,
Leaving me with a single tear-
Answers to my trivial questions.

13 Comments:

Blogger Jim said...

'Sorrow hums a hollow tune,
As I wait for her'


and flat chested ..



HA ! .....
i new it ur a guy !

11:41 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

honestly Jeremy ur good ... i tink .....








heyy wasnt taking abt yr poems !

8:43 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

visit http://sandita.blogspot.com for poems,

honestly i cant say which one is .....





worse

8:45 PM  
Blogger Citrus said...

lol @saby .. here's another thing i never thought i'd say... saby i love you.. you're super funny... so there you go a first time open declaration of my love

11:49 PM  
Blogger Citrus said...

@ saby... i think i've only ever told one other person that i loved them.. because they were funny [plural indicates royalty[this one isn't].. and also hides gender :).. in this case [as in most] it was a boy


extra thought- hmm very few girls make it to the funny oscars.. my sister for example is a funny girl.. can't think of anyone else

12:37 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

Citrus honey,
u better watch out
ur liable to be killed !







mebbe she will kill me too
dat Keshi

8:37 AM  
Blogger Citrus said...

oooh.. can i watch? [while she kills you] .. you go keshi girl ;)

2:38 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

saby I told ya one of these days I'm gonna axe ya...like in the horror movies...lol!

Citrus you can cheer while watching...thanks :)

Keshi.

4:58 AM  
Blogger De.vile said...

hey i really like this one...o boy this ones rich, say u gotta listen to this.


theres this kid who got a blog an all an guess wut?no one actually bothers talkin bout her stuff on it. its eitha her ugliness or someones castration or some like that thats in the comments list. har har! funny no?


i was laughin too, till i realised that blogs mine...

6:01 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hmmmmmm An axing spree. Sounds fun.. May I join in Saby's butt hacking campaign. Methinks Keshi n De.Ville might need and extra hand.. just in case. hahahahahaha.....


Regards,
Firacub.
P.S.: What happened De.Velle?? I dont see ya commenting on my blog!! Thats bad.. Chalo chalo jaldi se comment maro. hehehehehehehe..... lol. Muaaahhh n huggss.

9:21 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

hey fira baby

dont cry
i will always love u



and yr blogg

fact is i made yr blogg my default site
soon as i switch on my PC

i land up at yr blogg
i have a gud shit there and then move on

5:34 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

H E L P ! ....... H E L P !!!!


jeremy dont just stand there and watch
u love me dont u ?



besides u dont want blood on yr carpet, do u ?

7:06 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Where did you find it? Interesting read » »

9:11 AM  

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