Thursday, January 12, 2006

Little Secrets Old Men Hide

A summer morning of no particular consequence was flowing in with the vitriolic sun as you stood at the window from where you could see the long, lithe leg under her summer dress and she could see you from the corner of her uncharacteristicly large eyes. You wonder if she could tie you up to the chair, legs embrassing your waist. You would be amazed when I tell you this, shes been wondering how your sweat soaked fingers would taste and if half moustaches do tickle inner thighs. What a lovely way to start a morning, her dying tongue flickering against yours as you rub her little tummy against your rough palm while her proud chest pushes your shoulders against the walls your wife pressed you against when she hit you. Lovely, late Lolita, mine.

Oh now shes crying amazements in her head as you talk dirty to her in yours. Unchristian ways of beckoning Him as she's calling you names, lonely, tired ones. The ones you wanted to hear so often from your wife. She deserved what she got, a stunning death at the hands of her brother. Lovely, lovely C, with his brawny shoulders. Sometimes you just wanted to...

And just when the maid walks in, so many liquids on your widower floor. She's surprised because she doesnt know what it is. Not anymore. There is more than secretion there. A little girl and an old man with their dirty smells. A proud, fertile woman and a tired, willing old man. A lovely vagina below a lovelier face. A tired face over a scarred body.

Oh for the love of secrets.


Im angrier than this post can tell you. Penises ruling the world is just bugging me right now.

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15 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

Nice piece. And I know what you mean. I sure hate it when mine tries to take control

9:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

oooohhhhhhh

i cant believe dis
she rote about me

when u hate someone passionately
it very often turns to passionate love

as an old man of many years i new the love wud surface some day

and it did
saby khush hua

3:48 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

its time u posted yr pic de vile
guys are loosing interest in your poetry

they wanna see the author

10:15 AM  
Blogger DLAK said...

Penis's rule the world because vaginas are pussies. lol
also: Its better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all, isnt it?

6:42 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

http://imnutsincaps.blogspot.com/2006/01/i-love-u-just-way-u-r.html

but if u looked like DLAK
i am not too sure

7:20 PM  
Blogger The Wandering Hermit said...

Something very disturbing in this post...

but a brave one nonetheless.
cheers
z

2:26 AM  
Blogger Rex Venom said...

Hey. What you need is to get control over a penis of your very own, even if only for a few hours. Go on, Take The Power (Back?), and I hope things change to make you smile and see the beauty in the longing remembrance of an old man as he sees the force of life passing by in a sexy young lady. But either way, I love your writing!
Rock on!

9:35 AM  
Blogger tao1776 said...

De.Vile......I am deeply affected by your words and I'm not sure how to respond. There is truth and falsehoods hidden in your truth. It is deep. There is nothing more beautiful than making love with someone you deeply care about even if it is not your wife. There is something deeply disturbing about fucking someone because you can. The penis can carve a valley deep enough to swallow whole families....all for the sweetness of a vagina.

6:43 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

**Im angrier than this post can tell you. Penises ruling the world is just bugging me right now.


LOL good one Chikka!


Keshi.

10:43 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Through patience a ruler can be persuaded, and a gentle tongue can break a bone.

-Proverbs 25:15 Bible (15th-16th century)
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7:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

the de vile dont like me



coz i am an angel
and she a she devil

7:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

all the pricks (penises) of dis world UNITE !

we have nutting to loose but our balls


dis devile is taking her poetic licence too far

8:46 PM  
Blogger Vikas Kaul said...

I assume there is more to it than is apparent. And that I do not get. What makes you mad? Men ruling the world? What has that got to do with sexual desires and actions (in the context of your post) of a man?

Is having a sexual desire wrong? Or is having a sexual desire at 60 wrong? Or is it wrong to have a desire for one's maid? Or is having a desire itself wrong? Is expressing a desire in an explicit way wrong? Or is keeping a desire within wrong?

If I have understood this post ..mm.. slightly, its the last one.

So, don't women carry desires? They can camouflage their desires well, sure. So, does that make them lesser evil?

Finally, if its just another feminist ranting, then I got just one thing to say - it's women themselves who let the men rule. Think about it.

12:48 AM  
Blogger ie said...

savage, very very savage.

11:47 AM  
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1:12 PM  

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