Wednesday, October 12, 2005

FRANKENSTEIN

FRANKENSTEIN



Holes built, the trenches wait, not a glass coffin but a solid box of facts. I lower it, in the waters tinged with pristine hatred and create him-the scientist, of numbers and reason. He had a world in his head, of threads and black-purple shades, merging to form a picture in otherwise vacuum. I waited, squatted on his side as he woke, a cruel gift embedded in him-Mary Shelly's fantasy. I watch him walk and move into me, with an ease no other man can afford. I completed the story for her today; watch her turn in her grave, her grey, tattered white gown rustling in the wind brushing against my dead ears attached to a mind full of open doors. He swims around in my stomach, killing me, I let out a hollow scream. I drown him-paracetemol poison for his naughty self. He swims and then dissolves, his gift now mine and armed I walk into words that no words could ever be, into a realm tried so hard to be embedded in words of undue importance. And the doors open, I let them fly in, processing-me the machine, with a carrions gift. They were theirs, now mine-I let them in and they haunt me, eyes closed I see them murder me. They wake, give birth and walk in, again and again, chaos-unknown and surprising. I sing myself-us-to sleep.

Close our eyes, to the octopus unbound. Close our eyes to the octopus unbound.

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33 Comments:

Blogger firacub said...

The shadow lurks in first...

Now lemme read on..


Firacub

9:47 AM  
Blogger firacub said...

Good write up matey...

Just ease of n let it out...

If ya wanna talk u knw where to hunt.. Be at peace.. ;)


Firacub.

9:51 AM  
Blogger {illyria} said...

that was damn good, de.vile. i've missed reading such cutting-edge prose.

8:20 PM  
Blogger De.vile said...

Firacub: Na, this wasnt easin'. I feel powerful.

Transience: Thankee! But its pretty absurd, innit?

10:24 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Freddie wuz here.

1:40 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

Heyyyy Fira ur first again
a success




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6:29 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

uccess and failure are both difficult to endure. Along with success come drugs, divorce, fornication, bullying, travel, meditation, medication, depression, neurosis and suicide. With failure comes failure.
-Joseph Heller (b. 1923), Author, writer
Quote WorldFamous Quotes at QuoteWorld.org

07:23

6:29 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

O SHIT !
its Freddie again





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6:30 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

heyyy guys
4get dis De Vile

visit dis angel http://resplendens.blogspot.com/2005/10/when-you-seem-to-forget-small-gesture.html#comments


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6:27 PM  
Blogger Jay Noel said...

Wonderful writing...it flows very well.

9:49 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hey Dil.Ville,
How have ya been? I sent u a mail.. Did you get that??


Peace,
Firacub.

10:07 AM  
Blogger The Saturnyne said...

I always liked the last chapter of Frankenstein the most.

Like the unpunctuated thought-words of Molly in Ulysses

Like the final epic speech of Prospero in The Tempest

Some things transcend, and reach out and grab yer.

S.x

8:06 PM  
Blogger DLAK said...

I dont get it. Whatever...

5:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

DLAK is dumb

DLAK is dumb

DLAK is dumb









i didnt get it too
was there sumting to get????

1:41 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Brazilian ??
do they have blonde hairs down there?




blonde turns me on too

1:42 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

OHH !
u mean curly hair like DLAK has?




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1:44 AM  
Blogger sebia said...

She sat there,with frozen tears,and hazy numbness,he was the man,embedded with effulgence,and muted passion,she ws the woman with pain and hollow reason.the glass coffin and the mirrored grave ,denoted the quixotic indulgence..they wanted to fly,but the wings were tattered and the flame ws turning in 2 ashes.she opened her arms and ws lost in muted ice.he tried to fill up her senses but walked passed her,the souls culdnt entwine,the spirits culdnt join..the vaccuum between life and death ws too big 2 surpass...
beautiful stuff u write devile,,abstract,painful,,smtimes quixotic,smtimes sheer fantasy..smtimes..just plain hard truth..
tc gurly

4:34 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

some times
just plain SHIT







like SEBIA does

6:21 PM  
Blogger Ashes said...

it' abstract and lost.Too much caffine,eh?.
I always felt,like I do, a sense of loose threads thrown in and yet,at least in this writeup,they are way too many and the underlying form is difficult to comprehend.Maybe I am having a little less caffine..

8:49 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

i need a wooman
a devil wooman

9:46 AM  
Blogger Rex Venom said...

I never really know where your writings are taking me, but I alwasy need the ride.
So good.
Rock on!

12:58 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

u need the ride Rex
so ride on



we dont need u

8:11 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i am beeger than Ashes
beeger than Rexx too


- jockss




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7:34 AM  
Blogger De.vile said...

Saby: Whatever, old fella, stop going SHIT over people in ere.

Freddie: Yes, yes, you were.

S.Graham: It isnt really dark, just a rough night.

Phoenix: That was my intention. Thank you.


Saturnyne: It wasnt the chapter but almost felt like it. Loose and unearthly.


Dlak: Guess, staying up even after popping paracetemol isnt something you have experienced.

Sebia: Thank you, it might not really be the truth, just about how it is sometimes inside my head.


Ashes: nope, paracetemol. Too little of it


Rex Venom: Always my pleasure.

B Good: You aint fooling me Sabyness.

2:55 PM  
Blogger Incompetant Critic said...

Pretty Profound !

8:11 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

ASHES needs help
its urgent


no kidding
am serious devil

5:03 AM  
Blogger DLAK said...

Devile: Guess not.
xoxoxox

10:01 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

happy belated birthday granny

7:04 PM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Frankenstein freaks me out lol!

How u been chikka?

Keshi.

7:02 AM  
Blogger --pearl-- said...

hey gurl..wassup how you been?hope everyfin'z alrite...

dropped by to wish ya-Happy diwali,god bless!

4:12 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hows ya been buddy....


Just came in to Wish ya a happily Diwali and to light some candles in your dark world. Hope you enjoi. :))))


Peace,
Firacub.

6:23 PM  
Blogger De.vile said...

O we cant celebrate Diwali, thats three years in a row, but heck,

Wish you all one happy illuminated week.

Love,
De.vile

WB kesh

9:00 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

Thank u Chikka and a Happy Diwali to u too!

Keshi.

12:08 PM  

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