RECEPROCAL PUPPETS
And now for some teenage angst and truly heartfelt poetry.
RECEPROCAL PUPPETS.
Burns flare on yellow skin,
How does it feel to be caressed so cruelly, slave?
The bits of life slowly sucked away,
A mossy green on my ceiling grows,
A green-blooded heart encompasses agony,
How does your blood flow so indifferently?
Messages leaked into tonight's wind,
Oh, how the whore-d you hollers!
The blue vein flowers under your peel -
Overshadowing seasonal gardens-
Blushing under lunar stares,
How I forget my penitent soul on your lap,
Being crushed by your fanatic strength.
Occasionally dying under the curing sun,
Occasionally living under reciprocating strings.
RECEPROCAL PUPPETS.
Burns flare on yellow skin,
How does it feel to be caressed so cruelly, slave?
The bits of life slowly sucked away,
A mossy green on my ceiling grows,
A green-blooded heart encompasses agony,
How does your blood flow so indifferently?
Messages leaked into tonight's wind,
Oh, how the whore-d you hollers!
The blue vein flowers under your peel -
Overshadowing seasonal gardens-
Blushing under lunar stares,
How I forget my penitent soul on your lap,
Being crushed by your fanatic strength.
Occasionally dying under the curing sun,
Occasionally living under reciprocating strings.
Labels: RnB
posted by De.vile at 6:56 PM
19 Comments:
wat the fuck is dis post about?
and who the fuck is dis devile?
why the fuck she rites crap?
since when has she been riting dis shit?
who the fuck reads dis crap?
Silly girl !
The blue vein flowers...I think the true brilliance of the piece begins there..I like the last five lines the best.I rather like the whole whore imagery in your writing..seems to be a recent icon..or maybe it was always there and I missed it..who knows..but I do like it
Nice poem. Great!
If there ever were words as beautiful as flowers that i'd read,
then 'twas in thine blog!
Lol i know i suck at poetry...u ROCK as usual.
who the fuck is dead poet?
why the fuck ....
any way now i no who reads dis crap
I term thee, Saby, the single most annoying human being I have seen.
Deadpoet dont you dare comment back. If you just have to visit http://imnutsincaps.blogspot.com among a dozen other wasted blogs.
Its always a pleasure to see you in here Surrealiste. Btw, you have a very beautiful name.
Jay, welcome back.
Rebel, aww. Fank ku!
Is the "anonymous" is Saby? Hehehehe..
How can you tell, De Vile?
i am honourd by the de vile
but i dont deserve dis honour
i can never come quite close to her
and her poetry (if u can call it dat)
but when she walks
oooohhhhhhh
it is poetry in motion
who needs Jen- Lo
green-blooded heart !!
nice adjectives you have used here... nice..
cheers
z
shut up dead poet
u are boring and uninteresting if u havent been told yet
receprocal puppets
nature at its best;
sharing breath,
no penitent soul exits.
ooooohhhhhh De Vile
u look good in your new outfit
and tanks for pulling the curtains and bringing the sun in
even your sad poetry now looks great in here
and i will read for a change
i tot u told the dead poet to fuck off
the fucker is backk
Hey girl~ Is this poem about you? I completely get you! It makes my heart ache and memories of my own come flooding back in a younger life I've burried long ago. If this is about you, I get it, if not, beautiful illustrated to the depth of reach.
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