Sunday, May 22, 2005

LISTLESS

LISTLESS.

Heaving and thumping, a chaos of indefinite depth,
A pleasure of crossing limits.
On the last tides of diminishing words, after the last drops of unease,
It follows.
The darkness after nights of moonlit shadows.
You can feel the placidity build meticulously.
A wave of magic wand and the tears dry up in haste.
Nowhere to go.
The spectre builds in the sleep of the eerie.
A sea blue plastic bucket on the sea,
Flying high on wild horses of a howling symphony.
A blur of days and then a death still picture frame,
A tree house filled with mute dreams. Of primitive smells.
Nothing less.
A candy laced bitter pill of blood red wonder,
A giddy glee of wicked intent.
A half devoured human.
The ostracized crypt under the cobweb veil.

18 Comments:

Blogger Rex Venom said...

Damn! This is some really, really good stuff! “A half devoured human”- wow.
More…..More…..
Rock On!

4:14 AM  
Blogger DLAK said...

Roses are red violets are blue rainbows are fluufy and puppy dogs too.

5:45 AM  
Blogger {illyria} said...

gothic and shattering! loved this, de.vile.

6:37 AM  
Blogger Keshi said...

pretty heavy stuff chikka...but I dunno what to derive out of this :( as usual Im a blondie in this kind of poetry... :)

Keshi.

8:34 AM  
Blogger Ashes said...

too haunting.and too desperate.you showed a bit too much of yerself in here..*smiles*..i do understand.

4:42 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

wats evryone so excited about?



dis is the stuff
she has the potential for

am not surprised

but alas like dat blondie before me
i am awed

the subject is awesome and the imagery
if only i had a clue wat she is describing
ASHES of course pretends to have understood

i neede a second read and a third
will be back

one ting i am sure
she is bluffing abt her age

5:01 PM  
Blogger BM, The Necessary Movement said...

The last stanza is gripping!! it gave me the chills



"A candy laced bitter pill of blood red wonder,
A giddy glee of wicked intent.
A half devoured human.
The ostracized crypt under the cobweb veil."

7:02 PM  
Blogger firacub said...

Hi Dil.Ville,
I think I got what your trying to tell but I am not sure about my interpretation. Its only after I read the first few lines and the last few lines again. Is that waht your are trying to say???

Neways you have the the gift of playing with words. Thumbs up!!!


Peace,
Firacub.

7:12 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

if words not understood
and only understood by ur ownself
u can put ur own imagination and weave it without any expln

7:28 PM  
Blogger BM, The Necessary Movement said...

I think Anonymous just expalined it perfect!! He/She speaks the truth. That is the way you should read or perceive any art form.

9:21 PM  
Blogger --pearl-- said...

jeez!! i got d first few lines..n den i jus got lost..though muz say d imagery was good..but connectin it all togetha...took my mind on a rollacosta ride!!

12:59 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

i tink Fira got it
its an orgasm

all the heaving and thumping

3:09 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

i wonder how a virgin has soo much carnal noledge

9:58 AM  
Blogger Jim said...

dat was an ssumption

9:58 AM  
Blogger De.vile said...

Thanks guys for all that. Glad you people liked it.

special mention:
Saby Im a middle aged woman with a nympho streak trying to cradle snatch Ashes. Hope that made you happy. Now that its finally out.

Did I mention Im still stuck in the 16 year old virgins body?

4:14 PM  
Blogger Jim said...

heyyyy,
u didnt explain wat dis was all about

was Fira right ?
pleeeez say yes
dat wud make him over joyed

he never gets any ting right

7:39 PM  
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